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2019-10-19 04:54 pm

Someone Was Changing from the Inside Out - Chapter 9 Notes

And then my monthly goal was not just broken but shattered. Hoo boy.

The past few weeks have been a really tricky time for me. I’ve not only been really busy with work and personal life stuff, but I also had some pretty bad depression weeks in there. There were times when I wanted to write, but I just couldn’t get things going. Every time I thought I was back on top of things, something else would come up to completely throw things off. Fortunately things are going a bit better right now, so all I can do is try to make the best of that. Thank you to everyone for being patient with me!

Now on to chapter notes. There aren’t too many this time around.

First of all, the museum that Will and Hannibal visit is very loosely inspired by an existing museum - the Mütter Museum. I’ve never been personally, but it’s a place I’d love to visit one day. Of course the daemon museum and the Mütter museum aren’t all that similar, really, since the Mütter museum focuses on the history of medicine and there’s a bit of psychology going on with the daemon museum, but it was an inspiration nonetheless.

Some of the darker history we see in this chapter concerning daemon prejudices and “treatments” for having an irregular daemon are based on some of the stories I’ve heard about mental health treatments during the late 19th and early 20th centuries, lobotomies being a major example. (I’m also fairly sure that the description of intercised people in His Dark Materials is meant to harken to the practice of lobotomization as well. Hell, it might be literal text.) Getting into the history of medicine in that time period is fascinating, but it’s also brutally upsetting in many different ways. I recommend the podcast “Sawbones” if you’d like a not-so-viscerally-depressing introductory look at some of those histories and topics. It’s not JUST dedicated to that time period (there’s also a lot of stuff about the wild world of ancient medicine), but because we have a lot more material preserved starting from that time period, it comes up a lot.

On Specific Daemons

Abel Gideon/Medea - Gideon’s daemon is a mockingbird. I chose this form for a few reasons. First and foremost, mockingbirds are famous for imitating the vocalizations of other animals, just as Gideon has been made a crude imitation of the Ripper by Chilton’s psychic driving. Another minor reason is just a pun - the “mock” part of the word referring to Gideon’s sharp tongue and ability to snark at everyone around him. The name Medea comes from the Ancient Greek figure who in the play of the same name by Euripides, murders her ex-husband Jason’s new wife, his new father-in-law, and the children that she had with him in revenge. In the chapter, when Gideon refers to his daemon’s name as “wrathful”, that is why.
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2019-08-04 05:32 pm

Someone Was Changing from the Inside Out - Chapter 8 notes

Oops, the second more-than-a-month update! I had pretty bad luck in July and there was a roughly 2 week period where my writing ground to an absolute halt. Which is a shame, because I actually had a pretty productive start to July, cranking out a silly little 5k fic for Good Omens and getting a lot of progress done on chapter 9. August is looking like it's actually going to be fairly stressful as well, so here's hoping the stressful stuff will actually pace itself and not just hit me all at once like it did in July.

On to the notes!

There's some stuff in this chapter that I could comment on, but I'm actually going to be holding off on it until they come more into play in later chapters. As it stands, we've just got a couple of daemons to explain!

On Specific Daemons

Freddie Lounds/Arsène - Freddie Lounds's daemon is a ferret. I chose this form because it seems to fit well with a lot of Freddie's traits: sneaky, slinky, and stinky. Mostly kidding on the last part, but in canon Hannibal DID realize that Will had lied to him about Freddie being dead because he smelled her on him! The name comes from the gentleman thief Arsène Lupin, picked because Freddie is something of a thief herself when it comes to obtaining information about ongoing crimes.

Bella Crawford/Atlas - Bella's daemon is a Luzon bleeding-heart dove. Atlas comes from the mythological Titan who was tasked with carrying the weight of the world on his shoulders. Because Bella's diagnosis of lung cancer strikes me as a heavy burden to bear, and also because Jack's daemon is named after a Titaness, I chose Atlas for her daemon's namesake. The Luzon bleeding-heart, meanwhile, has very distinct plumage on the chest that makes it look like it's been mortally wounded.
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2019-06-23 12:00 pm
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Someone Was Changing from the Inside Out - Interlude 1 Notes

Cutting it a little close this time in my goal of having a chapter a month! But even though a bunch of non-internet stress hit me earlier this month, I still made it!

So this was the first interlude in the story. There is at least one more. I say "at least" because although I have one that is planned and I know exactly where it's going in the broader context of the story (right smack after what is probably the biggest turning point), it's very possible that another one might sneak in elsewhere.

Noboribetsu and More Eldritch Location Claptrap

In this interlude, I got to use my experience living in northern Japan for a couple of years. The town Hannibal visits here, Noboribetsu, is a real place in southern Hokkaido. It's a very fun little city. I lived a few hours north, so I didn't go there as often as I would have liked. The Hell Festival is also real and although I didn't write about it in the story, it features this big robotic float featuring Enma Daioh, the King of Hell, that drives along the main road of the onsen town and stops to yell and shake his arms along the way. Very much my aesthetic.

Jigokudani is also a real place! Obviously it's not a creepy, esoteric magic zone where the human soul can't tread, but it still kind of feels like it while you're there. Here is a website with some great pictures of the area. You can really see the very dramatic demarcation between the lush foliage and the volcanic land.

The creature that the Witches catch within Jigokudani is a mountain-type nekomata. Because most people can't set foot in areas like Jigokudani or Hell Valley, I like to think that all sorts of weird mythical creatures lurk about in them. But that's just me indulging my brand again.

On Specific Daemons/Characters

Shimamura Kiyoko/Daisuke - The kanji of her name would be 島村 清子. With these kanji, Shimamura is a surname that means "island village" and Kiyoko means "pure child". Her pug daemon Daisuke (大輔) has a common male Japanese name that would translate to "big help".

Shimamura Haruka/Shiramba - As shown by her craft work, Haruka is of Ainu descent. Her daemon's name comes from one of the Ainu kamuy (gods) whose dominion covers wood and other forms of plantlife. His shape is that of an Akita dog. Haruka as a name can have a a TON of different kanji associated with it with a bunch of different meanings, but for her it's 春香, which would mean "spring fragrance". Kiyoko and Haruka's young daughter, Mika, would use 美香 as the kanji for her name, which in this instance means "beautiful fragrance".

Murasaki/Fujiwara - It has always, ALWAYS bothered me that Lady Murasaki in Hannibal Rising seems to just have her name plucked from Murasaki Shikibu, author of The Tale of Genji. So to reconcile that for myself, I decided that as a very long-lived Witch, this is not her real name and she's just adopted the name of the famous author for herself. This extends to her green pheasant daemon Fujiwara, who is named for what is theorized to be Murasaki Shikibu's birth surname.

Chiyoh/Fukuda - Now that there was a theme in place of Murasaki stealing not just Witch babies but the names of famous Japanese authors, it gave me carte blanche to connect Chiyoh's name with that of the famous haiku poet Kaga no Chiyo. As a result, her daemon's name also comes from that poet's surname.
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2019-05-01 05:59 pm
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Someone Was Changing from the Inside Out - Chapter 7 Notes

The stars have aligned and I actually finished the interlude chapter before April! But before I post that, time to yammer a bit about the previous chapter!

First off, yes, that was Freddie Lounds grifting on Fox & Friends. Just like Beverly says, she doesn't believe what they're paying her to come on and claim, but she does believe in getting paid. The fact that I have now technically written Fox News fanfiction makes me want to take the world's longest shower.

Witches and Eldritch Locations

I really got to indulge in some of my favorite bullshit this chapter. Let's kick it off with Witches and magic.

In His Dark Materials, all the Witches we see (at least as far as I can recall) are adults. As a result, we don't really see how Witches learn their magic, though the general "vibe" I get from their magic is that it is likely something practiced but not studied. By that, I mean the kind of magic that you feel innately and hone as opposed to the kind that you pursue academically. A good example of what I mean here would be the practical, discreet, rural magic of Discworld witches vs. the elite, frankly often silly, urban magic of Discworld wizards. HDM Witches feel very much like they belong to the former category.

Some of the things that Calanthia (and Will to a much, much lesser degree) does in this chapter are straight out of HDM canon: flying using a branch of a magic tree and feeling the sensation of the light from the moon and stars as physical sensations. I've chosen not to limit Witch abilities in this story to things only seen in HDM, but I am trying to take care that the additional abilities don't feel out of place. For instance, Calanthia's little trick of seeming to phase through the glass is inspired by a canonical ability: that Witches can enter a mindset that allows them to move about so stealthily that they are nearly invisible.

Next: my completely inescapable obsession with places that are either subtly or very dramatically Off. The place that is just not quite fully normal is one of my favorite tropes of all time, and stories which feature it are often some of my favorite media out there (for example: the Southern Reach trilogy and to a lesser degree the film Annihilation, Tarkovsky's Stalker, some of Junji Ito's works like Uzumaki and The Enigma of Amigara Fault). I wanted the places in the world where people can end up separated from their daemons to have an element of this eldritch location trope. Since Will is particularly sensitive and a little paranoid about it, his perception of that slightly Off feeling is that this world's Death Valley and the land around it is sinister and suspicious. But for someone with a different mindset, they might see things differently...

I'll say more about that in next chapter's notes. ;)

On Specific Daemons/Characters

I'm not counting this chapter as Freddie's main intro, since her daemon isn't named this chapter. We'll get back to her soon.

Dwight Meacham/Jessamine: Unfortunately, we've all known a petty tyrant like Dwight. The kind of shitty guy who isn't even a big fish in a small pond, but more like a snapping turtle in a mud puddle. That's about all the commentary he deserves, frankly. His daemon is a coyote because as someone who has lived in extremely rural Texas as a child and who loved our chickens and barn cats, I have a personal vendetta against coyotes.
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2019-04-04 04:59 pm
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Someone Was Changing from the Inside Out - Chapter 6 Notes

Remember that "at least one chapter a month" motto? We already got ourselves a big oops! In my defense, the next chapter is over 10,000 words long - or roughly double some of the previous chapters. So I'm gonna say it all evens out in the end, haha.

There's actually something I forgot to mention in the last set of notes! The Gallagher Dare series. There's not too much to say about it other than it is purposefully meant to echo early-00s children's lit/YA like Harry Potter and Percy Jackson. Just imagine that all the popular kids books of that era got mashed up into a slurry and you are right on about how they would read.

The fandom politics you see in this chapter are entirely fictional and not based on any real fandom experiences. I'd be lying if I said I never saw some codependent relationships forming in any fandom I've waltzed through in the many, many years since I first started lurking in Sailor Moon forums as a preteen, but this revised version of the Lost Boys aren't based on any specifics. I hope I handled the material pretty well. I hate when shows try to do episodes about fandoms, and they're almost always incredibly inauthentic and tone deaf.

No new major/recurring characters or daemons to discuss this chapter, so that should be it! See you next time for another set of notes that will probably be 75% screaming incoherently about Witches.
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2019-02-20 06:39 pm

Someone Was Changing from the Inside Out - Chapter 5 Notes

As I mentioned a while back on my twitter (@rosenritter42), my goal is to have at least one chapter per month. And because my last chapter was on January 1st, that means that there was a chapter in January! Haha... ha... hhhhhhh.

But I mostly kid. Beating myself up over delays is what got me into a writer's block funk with Dies Irae. I'm trying not to get down on myself if I take a while to get a chapter together, since doing so seems to make my productivity worse. But that's enough of that! Let's get to the nitty-gritty with some notes about the previous chapter!

Witches

In the original His Dark Materials books, Witches appear to only live in what we in this world would call northern Scandinavia. They're all female, and new Witches are born when a Witch has a daughter with a human man. If a Witch gives birth to a boy, he is a normal human. They can live for hundreds of years (sometimes over 1000 years if I remember correctly). They have some magical capabilities, such as being able to fly with the use of the bough of a specific tree (the cloud pine), some weather controlling powers, the ability to become nearly imperceptible and move about undetected, and a few other things. At a certain point in their life, they undergo a trial that allows them to travel far distances from their daemon (more about THAT coming up in future chapters, so I won't be touching it here). They're pretty cool, and seem to be criminally under-utilized in daemon/HDM AUs.

Now, I'm keeping a good chunk of those things, but I have also altered them in order to fit both the Omegaverse stuff and for my own personal gratification. They still have certain magic abilities and an incredibly long lifespan; those are the things I've touched the least. But instead of being located entirely in Scandinavia, there are Witch clans scattered across the world. Every continent has at least a handful of clans, and they all have their own unique beliefs and cultures. Some clans are more open-minded while others are insular.

In this story, Witches exist outside of the Alpha/Beta/Omega system. We'll get more into the ramifications of that in a specific chapter later on. Witches can't sire children, but they can give birth to children sired by either Alphas or Betas regardless of of the sire's gender. If a Witch-born baby is assigned female at birth, they will have the abilities of a Witch and will lack an A/B/O dynamic. If assigned male at birth, they will not have Witch abilities and could be an Alpha, Beta, or (extremely rarely) an Omega. Because His Dark Materials never even acknowledges that trans and non-binary people exist, that is something I'll be dabbling in as I show more about how Witches work. Like Calanthia mentions in this chapter, some clans will allow a trans woman daughter to join her mother's clan. We'll also see how things can be for trans men born to Witches.

Omega boys born to Witches are incredibly, incredibly rare. Several decades can go by without a single Witch-born Omega alive on the planet. More on what that means for Will later.

On Specific Daemons/Characters

Calanthia/Ambrosios - I enjoy making utility OCs. When I write OCs in fanfic, I want them to be enjoyable, but not distracting enough that they take away from what the canon characters are up to. So, like a trash can at Disney World, my job is make something that is there mostly to serve a purpose and blend into the scenery. I hope I'm able to accomplish that with any OCs that I drop into the story. Anyway, Calanthia is more or less a magic cop with a snowy owl daemon. The name Ambrosios comes from a Greek name meaning "immortal". She might not be immortal, but she's been kicking around for a long time.

Clarice/her daemon - First off: fret not, folks who are not interested in Clarice/Hannibal, Clarice is not going to be playing a large role in this story. She's mostly here as a wink because I am a monster who thought the last name "Starling" was just too juicy of a pun to let slide. I like the idea that she'll grow up to be even more interested in the FBI than Calanthia is, and will be a world-class, grade-A magic cop. Because she's a kid here, she is unsettled, but I'm pretty sure her daemon's preferred form of a Hildebrandt's starling will be a keeper. I haven't named her daemon yet, but if she shows up later down the line, maybe I'll get around to it.
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2019-01-01 02:44 pm

Someone Was Changing from the Inside Out - Chapter 4 Notes

Hello dreamwidth, my old friend. I've come to post in you again. Because Tumblr went a-deleting, and my patience became fleeting-

Anyway. So. Feels weird to be typing in a format like this years and years after my misspent youth on LJ. But it's 2019 and everything old is new again because the world is on fire! I'm going to be experimenting with posting my chapter notes here from now on. If it's a colossal failure, then I'll re-examine other options. I do have a pillowfort now (user name "rosenritter"), but there's absolutely nothing there yet I haven't poked around with it at all so far.

I will also be trying to post mini-updates/thoughts on Twitter. You can find me there @rosenritter42.

There's probably going to be a lot of awkward cross-pollination going on while I figure out the best way to move forward with all this crud. Thank you for your patience!

On to the actual notes, ha.

This is the first chapter (not counting the prologue) with multiple POVs. In my previous writing, I've had a pretty bad habit of floating around through characters heads, sometimes on a line-by-line basis. But not in a way that felt like true 3rd person omniscient writing. I'm trying to keep myself on a stricter leash with this story, but this particular chapter really called for all three perspectives (Abigail/Melinoë, Hannibal/Aušrinė, and Will/Sabine) and I feel like it's structured enough to work.

Abigail is a fascinating character, but I always feel shaky when writing her. She's one of the tougher characters to get right, in my opinion. She won't have as many POV chapters as Will and Hannibal, but I will get to practice with her POV more later.

On Specific Daemons:

Melinoë: Because Abigail is not yet 18, Melinoë has not yet settled. Her name comes from the ancient Greek nymph/goddess of the same name. In some traditions, Melinoë is the daughter of Hades and Persephone, and in others Zeus and Persephone. And in still others, both at once, because the classics are a mess of conflicting belief systems over hundreds and hundreds of years. Melinoë is usually considered associated with nightmares and madness, which I feel is a big mood for Abigail. Pronunciation: meh-lin-OH-ee

Cernunnos: Garrett Jacob Hobbs' daemon is an elk stag. His name comes from Cernunnos, a popular name attributed to the 'horned god' found in certain pagan belief systems. I waffled back and forth on whether the name was a little too on-the-nose, but I was born on-the-nose and I will die on-the-nose goddamnit. Pronunciation: kerr-NEW-nohs

Caecilius: Louise Hobbs' daemon is a North American beaver. We don't really know anything about Abigail's mother through the series, which meant I could pretty much do with her whatever I'd like character-wise. I decided I wanted her to be aware of what must have been some really strange/suspicious behavior from her husband but unfortunately not quite on the right path to figure it out. I liked the idea of her realizing something is amiss while going over the family finances, and I was going to include a line about her working as an accountant but cut it for flow. The name Caecilius (and my accountant idea) comes from Lucius Caecilius Iucundus, a banker from Pompeii. Aptly, the name also derives from a root word meaning "blind", which references that she is unaware of her husband's murders and her daughter being an unwilling accomplice. Pronunciation: seh-SILL-ee-uhs

The next chapter is going to have so many goddamn notes that I'm already physically sweating.
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2019-01-01 12:25 pm
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Links to previous chapter notes (Tumblr)

Prologue notes

Chapter 1 notes

Chapter 2 notes

Chapter 3 notes

If Tumblr looks like it's going to bite the dust fully, I will probably import the note information to dreamwidth. Right now, though, none of my posts are flagged for NSFW/deletion, so I can be lazy a bit longer.